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tell me again what i once knew
when i was never alone
and you never let me go

tell me what life was like
when the sun bathed in the sea
and the fish danced on the waves

tell me how we used to fly
when the clouds laughed
and the stars kissed our faces

tell me how the horses ran
when the moon was full
and the wind whisked their manes

tell me of the sunsets
when the sea was wine-dark
and your heart was as a bird

tell me how we used to touch the sun's rays
when our dreams were a sweet reality
and time was held in the palms of our hands
My 48th submission for the 100TC.
I've been whimsical lately. :O_o:

EDIT: I thought this slightly fit the theme "freedom" for #xWritersUtopiax's contest. So... I submitted it. x3
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hannahdavies666 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
Beautiful. I can't say more, it's beautiful. I think this has my vote.
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shadowFletcher Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks. ;)
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faolen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010  Professional Writer
Very lovely. I love the description you used.
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shadowFletcher Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks. :)
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ShawtJyrarph363 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Wow that's good! I like it :)
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shadowFletcher Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks. :D
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ShawtJyrarph363 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Welcome (:
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lostinthedarkandcold Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010   Writer
i like it a lot, the curiousity of a child is a great topic.
puncuation and capitalization, it's not necessary, but it makes the presentation of the poem look a little bit better. but otherwise i loved it.

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shadowFletcher Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks so much! :D
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lostinthedarkandcold Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010   Writer
no problem. :D
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