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          It's because when all the paper airplanes fly by

                    They softly and carefully steal my heart away.




I lost the moon in the thundering, starlit waves
And the stars scoffed when I looked skyward.

                              (The clouds shook fingers and scolded the stars.)




                                        Whispers drifted down and cackled in my ear,
                                        But I could not understand the murmurings –
                                        And no one will teach me the sweet language.

          The wind tastes of twinflowers and salty sea,
                    And as it gets lighter, I find the horizon's sun.

The paper airplanes flew by again today.
They aren't paper-clean white anymore.
For =Chaotic-Whispers.

I hope you like it. :]

EDIT: I have entered this into a poetry contest (Poetic Power).
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:icontakaicheshire:
TakaiCheshire Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how this just flows.
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shadowFletcher Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Student Writer
Aww, thank you; I'm glad you like it. :aww:
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jessicaconk Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Featured here! [link]
Make sure to fave the article so you can get more exposure!
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:iconshadowfletcher:
shadowFletcher Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :love:
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Panda-Vision Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010   Writer
Super enigmatic ending - I like it a lot :)
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:iconshadowfletcher:
shadowFletcher Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks. :)
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livesofbirds Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Writer
feat: [link]

:heart:
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:iconshadowfletcher:
shadowFletcher Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Writer
Aw, thanks so much! :blush:
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livesofbirds Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010  Student Writer
you're welcome love. :tighthug:
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look-out-sunshine Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
i love this.
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